I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Miss Kyla.
Hi Azure you have done a great job on your work but there is one thing you have to work on and it is to try to make sense in the story but that is okay because I have done this before on my favourite superhero story.
The one that does not make sense was starlyns.
because he did not read it properly.
Hello Azure you have done good job but some of your work doesn't make sense you should read your work over again and check it.
Hi Azure you have done a great job on your work but there is one thing you have to work on and it is to try to make sense in the story but that is okay because I have done this before on my favourite superhero story.
ReplyDeleteThe one that does not make sense was starlyns.
ReplyDeletebecause he did not read it properly.
ReplyDeleteHello Azure you have done good job but some of your work doesn't make sense you should read your work over again and check it.
ReplyDeleteThe one that does not make sense was starlyns.
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